Oh, aye? In all those plays, where Chantry sisters get seduced? That's what they sound like in those? Must've skipped Afsaana with that one, 'cos I never saw it. That little pause isn't doing anything for your story either, by the way. The way you just said it. Little pause like that, sounds t' me like you might have, actually.
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Date: 2020-02-05 03:09 pm (UTC)